Here is our 2nd attempt for our trailer 'Wonderland'. Like the first attempt we showed it to our peers and teacher, who again helped us with some feedback.
From showing our first attempt to our teacher, we gained some feedback to help us improve and in turn created this attempt. Like every media outlet feedback is always needed, and our second attempt reached a lot of new feedback.
Here is what our teachers and peers thought for improvements;
-Make a Black and white contrast of some clips to differentiate between the 'present' and the 'past'.
- Take out the clips that saw the main characters on the bench.
-Change the sequence of the trailer to make the audience understand the storyline better.
-Add more 'drug taking' scenes.
-Add another voice over.
-Make him walk slower when walking through the graveyard. Show it's a graveyard.
-More scenes of the two main characters interacting in the 'wonderland' state.
This shows to be a lot of work and a small bit of filming needing to be added. With that in mind, we hope to get it done as quick as possible achieving the best grad when moving onto the next stage of the project.
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